Since I have the entire campaign unlocked and noticed some errors I figured I would list them all here for you guys to look at. Whoever wrote the story definitely loved their commas
Capture Dex's Tank Factories --> This should be capture DAX'S
Tank Factories. Also it says you cannot place units but you can... fighters and helis can actually help in this one.
Boot Hill --> Needs a period.
Death's Ravine --> Needs a period.
Hold the Line --> Needs a period.
Work with the Gardestians --> Needs a period.
Biscutian Alliance --> Needs a period. Also should say "Form an alliance with the Biscutians
" NOT Gardestians.
Revenge and Retribution --> Needs a period. Also NOT Russians, instead should say Gardestians.
Beginning Text errors:
pg 2 --> no comma after Unfortunately. no comma after Heavy Tank Division.
pg 3 --> no comma after currently. no comma after in reality.
pg 4--> reengaged is one word, no need to use a hyphen.
Retake the Airfield
there is an inconsistency between the title in the menu and the beginning text. One says the airfield and one says an airfield.
pg 1 --> no comma needed after Dax's army.
pg 1 --> no comma after airfield. no comma after quickly.
Destroy Dax's Tank factories
pg 1 --> no comma after directly.
pg 2 --> communication instead of communications. though instead of thought. no comma after defended.
Free Colonel Cannon
pg 2 --> no comma after stronghold.
pg 3 --> no comma after Cannon. no comma after artillery.
pg 1 --> no comma after stronghold.
pg 1 --> I'm pretty sure Southern shouldn't be capitalized.
Hold the Line
pg 1 --> probably no comma after Well. no comma after survive.
pg 1 --> no comma after army.
pg 2 --> no comma after unfortunately
Work with the Gardestians
pg 1 --> no comma after of course. no comma after the SECOND of course. no comma after forces.
pg 2 --> no comma after here.
No problems. congrats :-p
pg 1 --> no comma after free. no comma after have Dagnor.
pg 1 --> no comma after Hopefully.
The Final Defense
pg 2 --> no comma after apparently.
Revenge and Retribution
pg 3 --> no comma after inflicted. no comma after before.
Hope this helps!