Since I have the entire campaign unlocked and noticed some errors I figured I would list them all here for you guys to look at. Whoever wrote the story definitely loved their commas

Description errors:

Capture Dex's Tank Factories --> This should be capture DAX'S Tank Factories. Also it says you cannot place units but you can... fighters and helis can actually help in this one.
Boot Hill --> Needs a period.
Death's Ravine --> Needs a period.
Hold the Line --> Needs a period.
Work with the Gardestians --> Needs a period.
Biscutian Alliance --> Needs a period. Also should say "Form an alliance with the Biscutians" NOT Gardestians.
Revenge and Retribution --> Needs a period. Also NOT Russians, instead should say Gardestians.

Beginning Text errors:

Boot Hill
pg 2 --> no comma after Unfortunately. no comma after Heavy Tank Division.
pg 3 --> no comma after currently. no comma after in reality.
pg 4--> reengaged is one word, no need to use a hyphen.

Retake the Airfield
there is an inconsistency between the title in the menu and the beginning text. One says the airfield and one says an airfield.
pg 1 --> no comma needed after Dax's army.

Desert Pass
pg 1 --> no comma after airfield. no comma after quickly.

Destroy Dax's Tank factories
pg 1 --> no comma after directly.
pg 2 --> communication instead of communications. though instead of thought. no comma after defended.

Free Colonel Cannon
pg 2 --> no comma after stronghold.
pg 3 --> no comma after Cannon. no comma after artillery.

Boot Hill
pg 1 --> no comma after stronghold.

Death's Ravine
pg 1 --> I'm pretty sure Southern shouldn't be capitalized.

Hold the Line
pg 1 --> probably no comma after Well. no comma after survive.

Hire Mercenaries
pg 1 --> no comma after army.
pg 2 --> no comma after unfortunately

Work with the Gardestians
pg 1 --> no comma after of course. no comma after the SECOND of course. no comma after forces.
pg 2 --> no comma after here.

Delta Force
No problems. congrats :-p

Free Dagnor
pg 1 --> no comma after free. no comma after have Dagnor.

Biscutian Alliance
pg 1 --> no comma after Hopefully.

The Final Defense
pg 2 --> no comma after apparently.

Revenge and Retribution
pg 3 --> no comma after inflicted. no comma after before.


Hope this helps!

Rothmorthau

Awesome Post!!!

What do you do for a living? Want a job?

I offered Roth a job with Bandera Games months ago on the forums, lol! Didn't you get the memo, Chris?

I hope you do it. Roth! You always have amazing ideas, and you are fiercely dedicated to the game. Best Wishes!

I just unlocked the campaign, but now that it's v2, there are no page titles. So this may or may not already have been in your post, but just in case:
In the picture below, there are 2 errors:
1. soo -> so (first few words of 2nd paragraph)
2. How -> Now (middle of 2nd paragraph)


Still mission 1, first page of instructions:
1. attach -> attack


instructions page 2:
1. all "unit(s)" -> unit (you can't purchase multiple units at once, so just change it. It'll make things less confusing and look better)
2. hex(es) -> hex to work with the above
3. cloose -> choose
4. first comma -> colon


instructions page 3:
1. Light Tank -> Light Tanks (make it plural) -- halfway down the instructions


instructions page 4:
1. I would also include the fact that some cards must be played on hexes surrounding units too (ex. airlift, mines)


instructions page 5:
1. Scroll while -> mouse scroll wheel
2. edge -> edges
3. you can also look around the map with the arrow keys and WASD

the word "have" (after regaining control of Flak):

Started fixing these today. Expect the CAMPAIGN spelling/grammar mistakes gone by the next patch, and the CARD typos by the patch after that